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luzula ([personal profile] luzula) wrote2023-02-22 06:47 pm

Fic: "A Point of Honour" (Flight of the Heron)

Ha, I made every effort to be sneaky, but to no avail! I concealed the writing of this story from the Write Every Day community, largely by writing it in parallel with my longfic, and also changed my formatting, among other things by using double quotes instead of single. But still apparently I was obvious! I was trying to get back at [personal profile] sanguinity (to be clear: what she did was to make my Yuletide! \o/ But also she guessed my story while I did not guess her gift to me, argh…).

Ah well. Either 1) my style is too distinctive, 2) we are just too few people in this fandom, or 3) [personal profile] sanguinity is just too good at the guessing game. Probably all three! And now I am going to switch those double quote marks back to single…

But I am happy with the story, and happy that [personal profile] sanguinity enjoyed it! : D I also beta read [personal profile] garonne’s two stories for her, so I knew she was going to get a good haul. Thanks to [personal profile] garonne and [personal profile] regshoe for beta-reading this one, and to [personal profile] solo for translating the Scots!

A Point of Honour (4245 words) by Luzula
Fandom: Flight of the Heron - D. K. Broster
Rating: Explicit
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Ewen Cameron/Keith Windham
Characters: Ewen Cameron, Keith Windham, Major Guthrie, Margaret Cameron
Additional Tags: Post-Canon, Duelling, Established Relationship
Summary: Ewen has gone down to Fort William to visit Keith; meanwhile, a visitor from Mingary Castle arrives at the fort...
regshoe: Close-up of a grey heron, its beak open as if laughing (Heron 2)

[personal profile] regshoe 2023-02-22 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Now, if I hadn't already known it was you because of beta reading, I would have guessed it immediately from that author's note! If you want to cunningly disguise your formatting you should leave the space out of an occasional smiley face : D

Anyway, regardless, it is a very good story :)
sanguinity: woodcut by M.C. Escher, "Snakes" (Default)

[personal profile] sanguinity 2023-02-22 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, I'm sorry I foiled your carefully plotted plans! Alas, I did not even think to look at double vs. single quotes! As I was reading, I thought to myself, "You know who would really enjoy this story? [personal profile] luzula! It's right up her alley!" and long experience has taught me that when I'm thinking that during an anon exchange, the reason it's so beautifully suited to said person is almost always because it was authored by said person!

Further, the selection of topic spoke to a certain insight and confidence into what I might like, outside of what I had thought to prompt. Obviously those convos with you have all been conducted in public and anyone might have taken note of them, but you did lead that particular list of candidates...

But I agree that I was strongly helped by the size of the fandom -- the list of possible suspects was not that long.

And yes, I got SUCH a good haul. Thank you so much for your contributions, both as author and beta! <3
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[personal profile] hyarrowen 2023-02-23 11:00 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Must re-read!