New due South snippet: "Furtive"

[luzula]

Title: Furtive
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: R
Prompt: coffee
Length: 291 words
Summary: Masturbation. In a sleeping bag.
Notes: Uh, have some spontaneous porn? Brought to you by my frustration with graaaaaading exams.


Fraser needed to sleep, he knew that, and he certainly ought to be tired enough. But he couldn't. It was like an itch in the back of his mind, and before he could think, he'd unbuttoned his longjohns and stuck his hand down.

Ray, in the neighboring sleeping bag, was asleep despite his evening cup of coffee. Fraser looked at him with something that was almost resentment. Ray lay there peacefully with his slow breathing and his warm skin and his slightly open lips, while Fraser simmered with a desire that had nowhere to go.

It was wrong, he knew it, but he moved his hand, carefully, furtively. He wanted to do it firmly, just bring himself to orgasm in a few minutes of mindless urgency, but no.

Fraser kept an eye on Ray through almost-closed lashes and matched his breathing to Ray's, although he could do nothing about his pulse. The sleeping bag was thick--surely it wouldn't be visible if he--

The firmer strokes made him bite back a moan. Careful, careful. His fingers grew slick.

Ray moved, bumping against him. Fraser froze, his hand gripping his erection. Ray was saying something, no, he was just mumbling in his sleep. Fraser's pulse speeded up at the near-discovery, and he teetered on the edge of climax--no, don't come, don't come, you can't, not if he can see you--

It felt like forever as Fraser lay there, with the needy urge to just roll on top of Ray and thrust against him, god, thrust into him, deep into him. The thought was nearly too much.

Ray settled down again, turning over, and Fraser finally allowed himself those last strokes, holding his breath and lying absolutely still as climax hit him, waves of pleasure washing over his motionless body.

Comments

[exbex]

Whoa....now I'm glad my furnace isn't working.

[luzula]

Heating your home by means of porn! The new environmental solution. : )

[princessofgeeks]

*fans self*

[luzula]

*beams*

[spuffyduds]

WHEW.

[luzula]

: )

[love_jackianto1]

Fantastic :D

[luzula]

Thank you! : )

[hazelwho]

Mmmmmmmm!!

[luzula]

Glad you liked it!

[lamentables]

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!

So this is one of a set? The next from Ray's pov, because he wasn't really asleep was he? Go on, go on, go on!

[andeincascade]

I totally concur with this suggestion!

[luzula]

*notes down your vote*

[luzula]

In my head, Ray was actually asleep, but now that you say it...okay, there will possibly be a sequel, but I'm not promising anything!

[andeincascade]

Whew! You really know how to build the tension. Poor Fraser. Wake
up, Ray, and put him out of his misery.

[luzula]

Thank you! I was pretty happy with the tension-building myself. : )

[andeincascade]

Also, dear Luzula, a very happy birthday to you! A little gift is in the works but not quite ready. Hope you've managed some fun along with the grading.

[luzula]

Aww, thank you! *hugs* And a present for me? Oooh!

[mergatrude]

*FLAIL*

Oh, Fraser.

This was very nnngghhh...

[luzula]

*beams* Thank you!

[luzula]

Oh, and thank you for the v-gift! *hugs*

[jesse_the_k]

Whew. Where's my water bottle ... thanks *pant*

I love how your horny-Frader-voice perfectly matches urgency with manners.

[luzula]

Thank you! And I don't think he'd agree that he's showing good manners, here. *g*

[thursdaynext_27]

Your grading frustration made for a very hot snippet.

[luzula]

Boring seminars are good for these sorts of things, too. : )

[innocentsmith]

Yow! Very nice.

[luzula]

Thanks! : )

[glitteryv]

NOM to naughty!Fraser (and possibly NOT totally asleep!RayK?)

[luzula]

Thank you! And yeah, probably not entirely asleep. : )

[plotbunniofdoom]

Oh, this was hot and sweet and lovely! <3

[luzula]

Thank you! : )

[kuonji]

Wow!! Hot like blazes with a smidge of angst, just what I like. What a great welcome back to the land of working internet. :D

[luzula]

Thank you! : )