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Title: Pattern
Fandom: due South
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: R
Length: 300
Prompt: passenger, march
Summary: He was interested in hockey, Fraser reminded himself. He didn't usually need to concentrate to remember the score.
Notes: Er, have some porn? I'm enjoying my sudden burst of writing productivity while it lasts...


He was interested in hockey, Fraser reminded himself. He didn't usually need to concentrate to remember the score.

But now Ray was beside him, sprawling, splaying his legs, tantalizing in his availability. Not that he knew that Ray was actually willing to--just because he had been once, or even twice, that did not necessarily establish a pattern. But the possibility was there, and that was apparently enough to permanently derail Fraser's thoughts. He clenched his fist, so that his fingers wouldn't wander.

Ray noticed, glanced over, raised his eyebrows. Then his gaze snagged on the way back, looking Fraser over more deliberately.

"Hey." Fraser felt a slow flush rising on his neck. With an effort, he did not cross his legs, or tug his shirt down. "I'm...amenable," Ray murmured. God, did he use words like that on purpose?

He was soon lying face down on the couch, with Ray's cock filling up his mouth, thick and hard. Fraser squirmed around, finding blessed friction against Ray's--calf? ankle? He didn't care, just rutted against it helplessly.

He'd thought, somehow, that there ought to be more finesse to this, more subtlety, but no, he seemed to be just a passenger on his body's crude and inexorable march to climax. When it came, he moaned around Ray's cock, moaned long and loud while he just managed to keep his teeth in check.

He lay there, breathing hard through his nose, listening to Ray's urgent and obscene running commentary. "Fuck, fuck, you just--you're so hot, you know that? I want--I need--" and he tried his best to give Ray what he needed, tongue, suction, while Ray thrust up and cursed and came.

Three times, Fraser thought, still dazed, with Ray's come in his mouth. Three times makes a pattern, right?

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Date: 2013-03-03 01:37 pm (UTC)
ardyforshort: A person in a chunky jumper holding a cup of coffee. (due South - quote right behind me)
From: [personal profile] ardyforshort
Hahaha, oh Fraser. He can be so adorably dense sometimes.
This was fun, thanks! I approve of your sudden burst of productivity.

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Date: 2013-03-03 02:04 pm (UTC)
seascribble: the view of boba fett's codpiece and smoking blaster from if you were on the ground (Default)
From: [personal profile] seascribble
I am torn between being amused at Fraser not realising that OF COURSE Ray is amenable and also being kind of sad for him at how he's trying to convince himself that it really is a pattern, he really does get to have this.

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Date: 2013-03-03 02:54 pm (UTC)
hazelwho: (ds fraser rayk hearts)
From: [personal profile] hazelwho
Nggghh!

Also, oh, Fraser! *pets him* Yes, you get to keep him. And Ray, I love your Ray for saying "amenable" to Fraser. Hopefully he takes it one step further and hits him over the head with it. =)

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Date: 2013-03-03 11:30 pm (UTC)
jesse_the_k: text: Be kinder than need be: everyone is fighting some kind of battle (dS F/K duet)
From: [personal profile] jesse_the_k
Luzula porn? I'm amenable!

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Date: 2013-03-03 11:43 pm (UTC)
baronjanus: I was searching for the answer, it turns out it's rock and roll. Hugh Dillon Works Well With Others (slashed love under pressure)
From: [personal profile] baronjanus
Pretty pattern :) I do like that he's not making assumptions.

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Date: 2013-03-04 01:14 am (UTC)
mergatrude: a skein, a ball and a swatch of home spun and dyed blue yarn (Fraser - forearms)
From: [personal profile] mergatrude
Oh Fraser! If your issues weren't so hot...

(love this!)

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Date: 2013-03-04 12:46 pm (UTC)
mizface: (MotB-love)
From: [personal profile] mizface
This was excellent, Luz! Your Fraser voice is superb, and I love how he's focusing on what Ray needs, and almost distancing himself from what he needs, at least on a conscious level (if that makes sense). It felt very in character.

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Date: 2013-03-05 03:37 am (UTC)
spuffyduds: wash of color background, with text "spuffy" (Default)
From: [personal profile] spuffyduds
NNNNNNGH.

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Date: 2013-07-29 09:52 pm (UTC)
ride_4ever: made for me by oldtoadwoman (Fraser and Ray kiss)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Perfect Fraser-consciousness. And I <3 vocabulary-building!Ray ("amenable") so much! *smishes them together*

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Date: 2013-07-30 12:35 am (UTC)
princessofgeeks: (Default)
From: [personal profile] princessofgeeks
*fans self*

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Date: 2013-03-03 07:31 pm (UTC)
china_shop: Fraser, Kowalski and Dief (F/K and Dief)
From: [personal profile] china_shop
Awww, Fraser! *pets him* This is adorable and a teeny bit sad. Maybe Dief will talk some sense into him. :-)

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Date: 2013-03-04 02:25 am (UTC)
desireearmfeldt: (cloak)
From: [personal profile] desireearmfeldt
I like the fact that it's not actually clear what's going on with Ray in this story. :)
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