luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
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I am giving university students feedback on their writing. The report I am currently reading begins with the sentence: "A reality problem in mathematics is an attempt to attempt modelling population over time." It does NOT get better further along.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. *beats head against wall*

(Well, actually the sentence was: "Ett verklighet problem inom matematiken är ett försök till att försöka modellera population över tid." But I did my best to capture the multiple levels of bad writing in English.)

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Date: 2018-05-04 10:17 pm (UTC)
jesse_the_k: Panda doll wearing black eye mask, hands up in the spotlight, dropping money bag on floor  (bandit panda)
From: [personal profile] jesse_the_k
My sympathies!

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Date: 2018-05-04 10:50 pm (UTC)
china_shop: Close-up of Zhao Yunlan grinning (Default)
From: [personal profile] china_shop
Ugh. There's a tipping point beyond which I stop being able to offer edits/corrections and start wanting to rewrite the whole thing in my own words. That example is well beyond that point!

*sympathies*
Edited Date: 2018-05-04 10:51 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2018-05-04 10:56 pm (UTC)
genarti: Knees-down view of woman on tiptoe next to bookshelves (Default)
From: [personal profile] genarti
Oh dear. Best of luck! Sometimes it's genuinely hard to know where to begin to find useful feedback.

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Date: 2018-05-05 06:41 am (UTC)
lyr: (Mad Simon: cerulgalactus)
From: [personal profile] lyr
I so feel your pain. Grading papers requires a great deal of patience and fortitude. Also, frequent venting breaks.

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Date: 2018-05-05 08:30 pm (UTC)
karanguni: (Default)
From: [personal profile] karanguni
"attempt to attempt" AHHHHH

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Date: 2018-05-06 08:25 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (Fraser - facepalm)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
*winces sympathetically*
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