due South snippet: "Dialogue"

[luzula]

Title: Dialogue
Author: Luzula
Fandom: due South
Pairing: F/K
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: game
Length: 299 words
Summary: Ray wants Fraser to talk dirty.
Notes: Somewhat experimentally written. If someone who likes to do expressive sex scenes would like to podfic this, that would be fun...


"Oh, come on, Frase."

"Ray, you know I'm not used to this."

"You're a smart guy. I'm sure you can string a couple of words together."

"I...oh, all right."

"Okay, so you tell me what you want, and I'll do it. You want me to suck your cock?"

"Yes!"

"Then say it."

"I want you to suck my...Ray, this is ridiculous. I feel like an actor in a bad pornographic film."

"You mean you watch porn flicks?"

"No. Well, maybe once, for educational purposes. But that's not important."

"Huh, that's an idea...No, you're not gonna get me sidetracked here. C'mon. Please?"

"Oh, all right. Since you ask so kindly. Ray, please...please suck my cock."

"God, you're hot when you say that."

"Mmm. Oh, that's good."

[pause]

"Ray, why are you stopping?"

"Keep talking, or I'm going to stop again."

"Please suck me again. Use your tongue on--on the head, and--yes, like that."

"Mmm."

"Now, please--take your, your finger and put lubricant on it, and put it--I want you to put it inside me."

"Mmm?"

"Ray, you're just doing this to--all right, all right! Put it in my--in my ass."

"Nnngh!"

"Oh! Deeper. Yeah, that's..."

"More, please. I--I want more fingers. Yes! And move them."

"Mmm hmm?"

"Oh god, don't stop, don't...I need to--Ray, I..."

[incoherent sounds]

"Fun game, huh?"

"I'm not finished, Ray. Stroke yourself."

"All right, yeah. Fuck, you're hot. "

"No, slower than that."

"What?"

"Much slower. And don't touch the head yet, just the shaft."

"God, are you trying to kill me here?"

"Perhaps I've simply discovered an appreciation for this game."

For now, please comment at the LJ entry.

Comments

[lamentables.livejournal.com]

Oh yes, I can appreciate that game :-)

(I think you need to get two people to podfic it, so it remains a dialogue?)

[spuffyduds.livejournal.com]

*flail*

Fraser enjoying the ORDERING. OH yeah.

[innocentsmith.livejournal.com]

Hee! Fraser appears to be getting something somewhat different than Ray is out of this whole experience - it's gonna be hard to get him to stop making orders, I bet.

...Not that this is necessarily a problem. XD

♥

[equusentric.livejournal.com]

I think Ray may have created a very sexy monster. XD

[love-jackianto.livejournal.com]

'Perhaps I've simply discovered an appreciation for this game.'
Best. Game. Ever!

[mizface.livejournal.com]

I have been waiting *all day* to read this (stoopid work). And it was worth it. I love how Fraser had trouble asking for himself, but no trouble telling Ray what to do.

[exeterlinden.livejournal.com]

Haha! That's wonderful - sweet and hot and funny - and all in 299 words!

[prudence-dearly.livejournal.com]

"Okay, so you tell me what you want, and I'll do it. You want me to suck your cock?"
"Yes!"
*giggles* His little face! I can see it.

Yes, this works perfectly, with the tables turning, and with them both getting different things out of it. Also, I love all-dialogue stories, especially ones where Kowalski can only say "mmm-mmm?" *g*

[brigantine.livejournal.com]

Hee! Oops, looks like Ray's plan has backfired a bit. I don't think he'll mind too much, though. ;)

[tinzelda.livejournal.com]

maybe once, for educational purposes

This made laugh!

[plotbunniofdoom]

Hehe!

I love this, it really sounds like them. :)

[verushka70.livejournal.com]

I love the switchover when Fraser finally gets past it... and gets into it. Most excellent! *g*