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I've moved to Stockholm for two months, and I live at a mathematics research institute in the richest residential area in Sweden, which is pretty weird. It's a mansion with an honest-to-God tower in one corner, donated to science by a rich mathematician. Each semester they focus on one area of research, and give stipends to young post-docs who come there and do research.

Now I'm imagining a fanfiction institute along the same lines. We could have semesters dedicated to different fandoms, where authors come to collaborate, and there would be exciting seminars every week...

And now: porn!

Title: Watching
Author: Luzula
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: R
Length: 800 words
Summary: Sleepy Fraser, horny Ray.
Notes: I've been a little stuck for a while, so it was nice to write something spontaneous. Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] spuffyduds for the beta! How on earth is it so hard to write a summary of your story? I really can't master it. *sigh*


It was late evening when Fraser finally stepped through the door, and the lack of wind and the sudden light stunned him a little. He blinked, leaning against the wall as Ray looked up from the big mug of coffee he was nursing at the table.

"You all right? How did your patrol go?" Ray got up to help him with his coat, then sat him down on a chair, kneeling down to untie his boots.

"Fine. It was routine, really, although the weather did delay us a little. Ray, you needn't..."

"Sit, Fraser."

"Thanks for staying up. I'm sorry, you must have worried."

"No, I was fine." Fraser didn't contradict him, although the tension in his shoulders as he fumbled with the bootlaces belied his words. "You hungry?"

"I've eaten, thank you." Fraser lifted a hand that felt heavy and uncoordinated, to stroke Ray's hair. His cheeks blazed in the relative warmth of the cabin, and his feet began to thaw up. "Frankly, I think sleep is what I need the most."

"Come on, then." Ray pulled him up and towards the bed, tugging off Fraser's sweater and leaving it to drop on the floor. He meant to protest this, really, but found it took too much effort, and his other clothes went the same way. The sheets were strangely cool on his skin, but Ray was hot against him as he slid naked into his arms to kiss him. Ray was hard, he noted as if from a distance.

"Ray, I...I apologize. I'm very tired, I don't think I..."

Ray pulled back. "God, no. I'm the one who's sorry. I know you're tired, I shouldn't've bothered you. It's just, I've missed you, and I was kind of horny, and...just, sorry."

"Ray. You have nothing to be sorry for." Fraser threw off the sheets and blankets--his body seemed to be overcompensating the earlier cold with excessive warmth--and pushed himself up to sit up against the wall. "Touch yourself, Ray. I'll watch."

Ray looked at him and swallowed. "Okay."

Ray sat against the other wall, splaying his legs and drawing up one knee to the side. His hand moved to his erection, lightly at first, stroking with the tips of his fingers. Fraser felt his gaze like a caress, raising goosebumps on his skin and tightening his nipples, and he could see the small motions of Ray's eyes as they moved over Fraser's body.

His feet and hands were tingling, flooded with warmth. His sexual response to Ray, usually strong and immediate, was slow now, struggling against the incoming tide of sleep. But under Ray's intent gaze, he felt arousal flow sluggishly through him, pooling in his groin where his penis gradually filled and grew hard.

"Oh, Fraser, you're so..." Ray trailed off, leaving his sentence unfinished, as Fraser watched his hand speed up, stroking himself firmly. His chest rose and fell rapidly. Watching him, Ray was watching him watch Ray, their gazes locked together.

The tip of Ray's erection was glistening now with wetness, and Fraser reflexively flicked his tongue out, his mouth watering. Ray groaned, and his head fell back, thunking lightly against the wall. His hips thrust up, the rhythm uneven and stuttering. Fraser was torn between watching the bliss on his face, and the milky semen pulsing between his fingers as he climaxed.

Ray sat there, panting, until he finally looked aside and broke their eye contact, reaching down for the towel beside the bed to wipe himself off. He came closer on his hands and knees, then gestured vaguely. "Can I...?"

Fraser cleared his throat. "Yes."

Ray moaned as he took Fraser's erection in his mouth, as if he were the one getting sucked. Pleasure washed in waves over Fraser, and he floated in it passively. It felt unaccustomed to do nothing, not even move or thrust in response, only lie in lassitude while Ray brought him pleasure. Ray's tongue, his mouth, was the thread that held him to consciousness, kept him from sinking into sleep.

It had been long enough for him that he soon gave it up, coming into Ray's insistent mouth with a shudder. Ray licked him clean, then tugged him down beneath the covers and was gone.

"Ray?" he managed, and then the red light behind his eyelids turned to black, and the bed dipped as Ray sat down.

"I was just turning out the light." He felt Ray curling up along his back, and then cold feet on his calves. Fraser was drifting now, dissolving softly into the darkness. He wondered vaguely if it would be possible to lose himself in the night, if the threads of his self could just scatter and be gone. Then he felt Ray's hand on his hip, anchoring him, and he let himself slip away.

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Date: 2008-01-21 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] malnpudl.livejournal.com
Oh, so very hot and lovely! Sleepy sex and happy porny domesticity are two of my very favorite things, and this is a double helping. Much love.

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Date: 2008-01-21 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zabira.livejournal.com
absolutely wonderful, as usual, luzula! i love the sleepy domesticity of it, but its languor doesn't stop it from being HOT and delicious!

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Date: 2008-01-21 09:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carolina30363.livejournal.com
Very hot and very well written!
Loved it!

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Date: 2008-01-21 09:37 pm (UTC)
ext_12745: (Default)
From: [identity profile] lamentables.livejournal.com
Hot & domestic makes me happy :)

Mmmmmmm.

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Date: 2008-01-21 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kill-claudio.livejournal.com
That was gorgeous, and totally hot. It's lovely to see Fraser being able to sit back and take for once, and it was completely in character because only total exhaustion would make Fraser that...malleable. I love little snippets that show us how they manage to neatly interweave their lives together, and this was perfect.

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Date: 2008-01-21 11:02 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
I loved that! Ray's cold feet against Fraser's calf was the perfect topper.

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Date: 2008-01-21 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the_antichris.livejournal.com
This is lovely! Happy sleepy domestic porn, yay!

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Date: 2008-01-22 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmmarmalade.livejournal.com
Mmm, the two of them watching each other....just so hot.

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Date: 2008-01-22 01:18 am (UTC)
akamine_chan: Created by me; please don't take (Default)
From: [personal profile] akamine_chan
Okay, I'm ready to go hangout at a fanfiction mansion. We could have scholarships for the less fortunate fangrrls so everyone could come...hm...bad choice of words, there. Seminars, mini-courses, classes on how to write a good blow-job...oh, yeah, count me in!

Loved the story, Luzula. Hot and dreamy and sexy with the coolest ending lines:

He wondered vaguely if it would be possible to lose himself in the night, if the threads of his self could just scatter and be gone. Then he felt Ray's hand on his hip, anchoring him, and he let himself slip away.

Just, wow!

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Date: 2008-01-22 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dessert-first.livejournal.com
Lovely and hot! Mmm, domesticity!porn in the wilds of Canada.

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Date: 2008-01-22 03:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com
WOW--that is both incredibly hot and incredibly beautiful. That last line alone should win some kind of prize. Ray as anchor. I totally get that. LOVE this, wow. \o/

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Date: 2008-01-22 03:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] keerawa.livejournal.com
Mmmmm. lovely. I have a serious kink for watching and being watched. I particularly liked Fraser felt his gaze like a caress, raising goosebumps on his skin and tightening his nipples, and he could see the small motions of Ray's eyes as they moved over Fraser's body.

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Date: 2008-01-22 06:39 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] mlyn.livejournal.com
I like this—a great balance of sexy and domestic, as others have said. My only minor complaint was that the beginning seemed a tad rushed, but it works out well overall.

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Date: 2008-01-22 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gournay.livejournal.com
So sweet. Actually the sweetness overcomes the hotness. Ray and Fraser naked is hot but together they are so so sweet. Well written. Short, with a beginning and an end. A fic of high quality.
Love it! \o/

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Date: 2008-01-22 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leafy22.livejournal.com
How on earth is it so hard to write a summary of your story?
I thought the summary of your story was excellent - and the story itself was excellent too! Ray's cold feet and anchoring hand...mmmmm!

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Date: 2008-01-22 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] burntcopper.livejournal.com
mmmmmMMMMMMmmmmmm

:lazy stretch:

Oh yeah.

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Date: 2008-01-23 01:16 am (UTC)
ext_1611: Isis statue (fraser/rayk)
From: [identity profile] isiscolo.livejournal.com
Aw, sweet and hot.

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Date: 2008-01-23 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nos4a2no9.livejournal.com
Mmmm, that was delicious! Very loving and warm and caring, but also sensual and sexy. Very nice job, [livejournal.com profile] luzula!

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Date: 2008-01-24 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sisterofdream.livejournal.com
Aww. This was hot and sweet. I love the boys just being all homey (and also hot).

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Date: 2008-01-26 04:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spuffyduds.livejournal.com
This is just as yummy on reread! Mmmmmm.

And before they even get to the really hot stuff, I love the detail of Ray dropping to his knees to take off Fraser's boots--domestic with a side of subby, oh yeah.

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Date: 2008-01-28 12:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arrow00.livejournal.com
This was such sweet hotness. Fraser's passivity due to his lethargy was a beautiful touch. And this moved me so much:

Fraser lifted a hand that felt heavy and uncoordinated, to stroke Ray's hair.

I adored the last two lines.

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Date: 2008-01-30 12:27 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jesse_the_k
Lovely! I'm so thrilled to discover a new writer in our lovely fandom, and one who is so kind to the boys.

I love the heat variations -- you start with Fraser's toes warming up and end with Ray's toes chill on Fraser's body.

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Date: 2008-02-02 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-grrl.livejournal.com
Beautiful, sweet, and oh so hot! Yum. *snuggles*

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Date: 2009-05-18 12:43 am (UTC)
plotbunniofdoom: (f/k: fraser stare)
From: [personal profile] plotbunniofdoom
Oh, that's just marvellous! Such lovely descriptions, Fraser's tiredness is so vivid. And the sleepy sex is just *GUH*.

Great story. :D

(I've been looking through your story index btw)

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Date: 2009-05-18 12:45 am (UTC)
plotbunniofdoom: (Default)
From: [personal profile] plotbunniofdoom
P.S.

I friended you, I hope that's ok. :)

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Date: 2010-05-09 12:18 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wanderingsmith.livejournal.com
Then he felt Ray's hand on his hip, anchoring him, and he let himself slip away.
ummmm -happy sigh-
so warm and comforting. beautiful scene

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