due South snippet: "Touch"

[luzula]

Title: Touch
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski UST
Rating: PG-13
Length: 297 words
Prompt: jump
Summary: "Lie down on the floor, Ray. And take your shirt off."
Notes: A quick spontaneous snippet for vsee. : )


"Yeah, okay, I'm stiff. What? I had to hang off the side of a building yesterday."

Fraser purses his lips thoughtfully. "Lie down on the floor, Ray. And take your shirt off."

"What?"

"I'll give you a backrub." Fraser starts rolling his shirtsleeves up. Ray swallows and obeys.

To no one's surprise, Fraser is very good at massage.

"Where'd you learn to do that?"

"From a book." Fraser's fingers knead along his spine, and dig deep into his abused muscles. They feel like spaghetti, the way it gets when you cook it without oil and forget to stir: stiff and clumped together. But Fraser's warm, strong, competent hands are working all Ray's kinks out (ha, he wishes). Ray tries not to make embarrassing noises.

"Do you have lotion?" Fraser asks.

"Uh, yeah. Bathroom." Ray closes his eyes and waits for Fraser's hands to come back, now with added glide. God.

Fraser swings his leg over so that he's straddling Ray's ass. Ray jumps and feels the back of his neck heating up. He barely manages not to spread his legs in invitation, but he can't help his dick reacting. Is this normal partner-type behavior to Fraser? Yes? No? He can't tell.

Fraser's fingers are circling over one stubborn knot between his shoulderblades, riding that sweet line between pleasure and pain. Ray does moan, then, and Fraser lets up immediately.

"Too much?"

"Nnngh. I mean, no. S'good."

Fraser goes on, and Ray's breathing deepens and slows. It's not just that it's turning him on (although, god, is it turning him on). It's feeling someone touch him like this, warm and caring. Skin-to-skin contact.

When Fraser finally stops, Ray just lies there and wishes those hands would come back.

Comments

[lamentables]

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Nice.

[luzula]

Thank you. : )

[spuffyduds]

Oh, tasty.

[luzula]

They are both very tasty!

[brigantine]

Ooo, I do like the imagery here. I can imagine Ray plotting his chance to reciprocate. :)

[luzula]

Thank you! And feel free to write that sequel if you want. : )

[2corbies]

Lovely! I think the best UST stuff has this kind of frustrated sensuality.

[luzula]

Thank you! I am quite fond of UST. : )

[jesse_the_k]

Yummy.

[luzula]

Thanks! : )

[mergatrude]

Oh, this is niiiiiice!

[luzula]

Thank you kindly!

[the_antichris]

Mmmmmmmm. Can you send Fraser to fix my back?

[luzula]

Glad you liked it! And I think there would be many fangirls standing in line.

[vsee]

Oh, sweetie, thank you so much for this burst of spontaneous, sensual UST. It's absolutely delightful, and a little gem of all the things that make me most happy. I'll never tire of these guys teasing and adoring one another, in all the good ways.

[luzula]

Yay, you liked it! I thought you might. *hugs*

[glitteryv]

How yummy! I love me some NC-17 when F/K happens, but I've got some hidden F/K UST buttons that are just waiting to be pushed. Loved EVERYTHING about this snippet, Luz: from the tension to RayK's not-quite-release and all the touching and massage! I'm a complete sucker for F/K massage in fics. As if it was not obvious enough. *rolls eyes at self*

My favourite quote:
Fraser swings his leg over so that he's straddling Ray's ass. Ray jumps and feels the back of his neck heating up. He barely manages not to spread his legs in invitation, but he can't help his dick reacting. Is this normal partner-type behavior to Fraser? Yes? No? He can't tell.

But you know he LOVES it (as do we)! Again, great snippet, Luz. I'm going to be thinking about this one for a while :)

[luzula]

Ooh, that is some delicious feedback. So glad you like it! And yes, I have a thing for UST as well.

[exbex]

My fave part: "To no one's surprise, Fraser is very good at massage." I love when that 'Fraser is ridiculously good at everything' trope shows up in fanfic :D I also like how you made me feel very very bad for Ray, lol.

[luzula]

Well, Fraser is canonically good at many things. *g* And yeah, I think Ray is a bit starved for touch, here.

Thank you!

[neu]

Ray was already left hanging off the side of a building, Fraser can't really leave him hanging off this side of a massage, yes? Absolutely lovely. Ray needs more touching :)

[luzula]

I'm sure he'll get more touching eventually. *g* And thank you!

[akite.livejournal.com]

Wah! I want Fraser to give me a massage. No fair! *g*

[luzula]

Me, too! Life isn't fair. : )

[thursdaynext-27.livejournal.com]

*raises her hand for a Fraser massage*

[luzula]

Heh, get in line. And thanks for the comment!

[china_shop]

Oh yum! <3

[luzula]

Glad you thought so! : )

[gloriana.livejournal.com]

Hey Luz, this was beautifully sensuous :) :) I loved that moment of utter relaxation at the end, and the power of touch that you evoke there. Comfort and pleasure, more than just sex. But the sex in this bit:

Fraser swings his leg over so that he's straddling Ray's ass. [...] He barely manages not to spread his legs in invitation

is guh-worthy on its own.

[luzula]

Thank you! Yeah, I didn't want to make it just about sex. I figure maybe Ray is starved for touch, too.

[ride-4ever.livejournal.com]

The physicality of caring touch AND the intimation of more....GUH. *whimpers with pleasure*

[luzula]

Thank you! UST is fun to write.