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Witchmark by C L Polk (2018)
For book club. I enjoyed this in the sense that it was an easy read and I kept reading because I wanted to know what would happen next. But I found the romance very thin--there was never a sense of what each character fell for in the other. And Tristan is supposed to be from some analogue of Faery, but he never acted like he was anything other than human. But it was a good choice for book club, because we definitely had a lot to talk about, re: both the romance and the worldbuilding and plot! (Also, I guess I've read too much military history by now, but officers wearing scarlet uniforms and private soldiers grey ones in a WWI analogue? That's like the officers wearing big targets instructing the enemy to shoot them. Hopefully they were only dress uniforms.)

The Big House by Naomi Mitchison (1950)
Oh, this was lovely. It's a children's book set in post-WWII Scotland, with two children rescuing a Tam Lin-like figure from the fairies. In the course of this they also go back in time, and are confronted by the girl's early 19th century ancestors (the lairds) being terrible to the boy's (who are commoners, and have Rights of Man hidden under their mattress, because it's Mitchison, so of course they do). I was a bit boggled by the bit after they've rescued the Tam Lin figure, because I certainly would not take getting a surprise baby to bring up in my stride as the girl's household does here! But I guess it is a possible solution to having a character out of time like that--and certainly much better IMO than introducing an icky romance between the girl-Janet figure and the adult Tam Lin (side-eyes Fire and Hemlock). And then after this there's a whole subplot left, where they go even further back in time, and the boy ends up in a privileged social position instead, which he is tempted to stay in the past to keep. For a 170-page book, there's certainly a lot going on!

Also, I'd like to recommend a story from the recent femslash exchange: Flowers of the Ivy, by [personal profile] regshoe. I reread Lolly Willowes just in order to beta-read this story, and it's lovely. : )

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Date: 2020-11-22 11:11 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] isis
Hah, I agree with you on Witchmark, never got into it and never felt the 'otherness' that was supposed to be there.

I should read more Mitchison!

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Date: 2020-11-23 05:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] isis
Only Travel Light.

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Date: 2020-11-22 11:23 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] chestnut_pod
Yes, I found Witchmark to fall a little flat for me as well, largely on the weight of the interpersonal relationships -- for me, it was Secret Magic Officer MC's relationship with his sister that felt too lightly sketched to be justified. However, love some good bicycle worldbuilding!

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Date: 2020-11-23 06:37 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] regshoe
Oh wow, The Big House sounds great—ballads, fairies, time travel, class conflict, Scottish history, that certainly is a lot for a short children's book to deal with well! *adds to list of which Mitchisons I should read next*

Thank you for the rec :D

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Date: 2020-12-25 08:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] glitteryv
The way I hated Witchmark made me also feel v. guilty because I knew the author is a POC and there were elements in it that should've pinged me.

I liked Miles and Tristan fine.

But I just couldn't deal with the poor worldbuilding. It's a huge problem when I kept getting distracted by my own questions as to how XYZ worked in that 'verse or how would a largely disabled population be affected by the twist abr the aether.

My other large gripe was Grace. I really, REALLY couldn't roll with her motivations + handwringing for 95% of the story.

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Date: 2020-12-27 03:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] glitteryv
It definitely needed a lot more development (especially since it was meant to be the foundation for the trilogy.) Tho, imo, it seems like the author herself wasn't sure as to where the story was going to go. Per what I remember, the book was originally going to be a duology that the author then expanded to a third book.

My 2020 reading has been all over the place (including a months-long slump). Thankfully, I've got metric tons of fics to enjoy, but that's also meant that I've neglected my TBRs. /o\
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